Patricia Polacco is a famous author and illustrator that writes children books. She used her experiences in her life to create stories for kids to read. She first started writing children books when she was 41 years old. We think Patricia Polacco had a very interesting life and enjoys writing books. We also think her books is creative and she has a excellent talent of writing stories!
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Micah and Mckenna:glow-we love how you put a ! after the last sentence because its a exciting facts.Grow- We think that you should add a little more facts to support the other details.
Caleb: GLOW- I think you guys did a great job on explaining who she is. GROW-Explain a little bit more.
Kalin and Kobie: Glow- Nice vocabulary Grows- Needs more details
Kaui: Glow- I like how you remembered to under line the tittle. Grow- I think that you should write some books that she wrote.
Kalin:Glow- I like how you put jucy words for example tallents.
Grow-Needs more "because" at the end.
Patricia Polacco is a famous author and illustrator that writes children books. She used her experiences in her life to create stories for kids to read. She first started writing children books when she was 41 years old. We think Patricia Polacco had a very interesting life and enjoys writing books. We also think her books is creative and she has a excellent talent of writing stories!
Kamalanai: glow- I really liked how you guys said that she writes creative books because she really does.
grow-I think that you guys should put a ! right after your first sentence because I think it would sound more fun.
Micah and Mckenna:glow-we love how you put a ! after the last sentence because its a exciting facts.Grow- We think that you should add a little more facts to support the other details.
Caleb: GLOW- I think you guys did a great job on explaining who she is. GROW-Explain a little bit more.
Kalin and Kobie: Glow- Nice vocabulary Grows- Needs more details
Kaui: Glow- I like how you remembered to under line the tittle. Grow- I think that you should write some books that she wrote.
Kalin:Glow- I like how you put jucy words for example tallents.
Grow-Needs more "because" at the end.